poem competition

nah... its purely for fun. its not tat i'll b winning any prizes anyway. if i can get even a keychain for it Shakespear would b out of job...

here goes nothing...

days went pass,
strangers walks past,
here I am, standing in the aisle,
alon and desolate, hoping towards the sky

there were me, there was you,
never doubted, our love is true

whenever there's you, there will always be me,
with all the joys and sorrows, we're made to be,
my dawn won't start without the sight of your face,
dusk comes when you left me in outer space

hiding in the dark,
stealing glances from afar,
I know I shouldn't, I knew I've sinned,
but what could I do? I just can't help it,
we're made for each other, but not forever,
what can I do? I'm just a dammed fool

time shall past, glaciers shall melt,
by the end of time, we shall all be free,
now, I shall live by the memory of our past...

ok, stop all ur strange looking face... i know its dumb, i know its stupid... but look out, here's another.

another bright and sunny day,
with you in my arms, jumps started my day

a million things I would tell you,
for all my past I wish to explain,
I would listen to you if you meet my stare,
vapourize your tears with my sky,
with me, all is fine

your hands in mine and we shall fly,
over the clouds, where jets cant glide,
an evening on the beach,
as the sun cools into the night

me and you, an entity that'll never end...


ok, done. noe you can go on criticising me if you want. oh, wat am i thinking, of course u just cant wait to blab bout me... but, pls.. let it b anything than typos

still got 2 short stories... mayb next time